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路点拨:由提示内容可知,本倡议书的重点是把提示要点表达出来.为了使文章有层次感,可分三层来写.第一层是"对物"的态度及做法.即提示部分的前三条(takecareofflowersandtrees,notspitinpublicplacesorthrowrubbisheverywhere,obeythetrafficrules),第二层是"对人"的态度,即提示的后两条(respectourteachers等,bepolitetoothers等),最后可用一句话总结,或发出号召,或提出祝愿.

参考模板:对"物"—→Weshouldtakecareof等.Don'tspit等.Wemustobey等.

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对"人"—→Weshouldrespect等,bepoliteto等.Weshouldhelp等.

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总结—→Ifwe等,ourcitywillget等./Ihope等.

7.给学生10分钟的时间遣词造句——组织语言——起草文章.

8.学生同桌之间交换作文批改,按照平时老师指导的从要点,语言准确性,上下文的连贯性,书写和卷面,字数达标等方面来给分,根据错误(格式,拼写,语言,时态,语态,标点,人称)多少来扣分.对你认为是好词好句的用波浪线画出,文章中的连接词打上星号,并且可以写上自己想到的更好的替换词等.

9.老师抽取得分较高的两篇文章与学生共赏,并就行文和修改进行讲评.

10.老师给出范文并讲评.

SetUpaNationalCivilizedCity

Dearschoolmates,

OurZhanjiangCityistryingtosetupanationalcivilized(文明的)city.Weknowitincludesexcellentenvironmentandgoodbehavior.Sowemiddleschoolstudentscandosomethingforit.

Tomakeourcitymorebeautiful,wearesupposedtotakecareofflowersandtrees.Wemustn'tspitinpublicplacesorthrowrubbisheverywhere.Andweshouldnotbreakthetrafficrules.

Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldrespectourteachersandtheold.Weshouldalsogetonwellwitheachother.Besides,weshouldbealwaysreadytohelpeachother.Doyouagreewithus

Ifwetryhard,ourcitywillgetmorefortable.Let'sstartfromourselves！

TheStudentUnion

June13th,2016

高分亮点:本文叙事完整,全文围绕"倡议",用mustn't,shouldn't,should等表达了委婉而坚决的态度.全文用不定式和介词短语作过渡句,使文章具有号召力.在语言方面,作者用了很多短语,如:besupposedto,getonwellwith,agreewith等,不仅使文章更具有吸引力,而且渲染了气氛.

11.课后,老师可选择一些不同层次的学生作文进行面批,确切掌握班里各层次学生对本单元重点的掌握,吸收和运用程度.

四、单元话题作文优化设计方案二

1.写出你喜欢做的三,四件事情.

Examples:speakEnglish,swim,useputers

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2.根据Robert求职信的内容,选择英语表达的正式形式.

1.______(a.DearSirorMadamb.Hello),

2.______(a.Iamreplayingtoyouradvertisementb.Isawyouradvert)intoday'sDailyNewsfor3.______(a.someonewhocanteachkidstoswimb.aswimminginstructor)atthenewHolidayCenterforteenagers.4.______(a.Iwantthejobofb.Ianapplyingforthejobof)instructingthefifteen-year-olds.

5.______(a.Yousaidintheadvertthatyouwantedb.Youadvertisedfor)afifteen-year-oldinstructorforthefifteen-year-oldsandIamfifteen.

6.______(a.Atthemomentb.Rightnow)I7.______(a.gotob.amapupilat)BryantRoadSchool.Iaminyear11.8.______(a.Amongmyqualificationsisb.OnethingIhavegotis)aswimmingCoachingCertificate(withLifesaving).Iamanexcellentswimmer！

9.______(a.Icaneandteachb.Iamavailablefrom)13July,whichisthestartofourschoolsummerholidaysuntil25August,whenmyfamilyaregoingonholiday.10.______(a.Icaneandseeyou,ifyoulike.B.Iwouldbehappytoeforinterviewifselected.).11.______(a.IencloseaCV.B.Here'ssomeinformationaboutme).

12.______(a.Yoursfaithfully,b.Seeyousoon,then,)

13.______(a.RobertSimpsonb.Bob)

答案:1.a2.a3.b4.b5.b6.a7.b8.a9.b10.b11.a12.a13.a

3.依照上面的练习,完成下列句子.

1.Iamverygoodatswimmingatschool.

2.IhavebeenlearingEnglishfor11years.

3.Mysummerholidaysfromschoolthisyeararefrom13Julyto25August.

4.根据Robert的简历内容完成下面的句子.

CV:RobertSimpson

Born:1989,London

Address:137RutlandStreet,London,tel:020-7563-5192

School:QueenMarySchool,London